Lavender's AP Lit Class Blog

Lavender's AP Lit Class Blog

Thursday, September 16, 2010

my introduction.. life with the writerss....


A dock stretched over the mirrored lake that spread 270 degrees around us. The mountains cascaded into bigger more valid peaks in the distance and the sun squeezed itself through two prominent summits miles to the west. It was extravagant, the clouds glowed orange and pink. The sun’s rays seemed to pull us in, to make us gravitate towards them. It danced and sank slowly away, reaching to say goodbye till tomorrow and greeting the other side of the world with a warm hello.

We were a group of fourty-five exchange students gathered from every corner of the earth. Every one of us had adventured out of our comfortable life styles with our friends, families, hobbies and languages to learn, experience, see an unknown culture and develop into the young adults an experience like this promised. We became quiet, curious about the surrounding actions and quickly gathered informational pieces that we could chunk together to use in our circumstance to grow, succeed and make a difference.

Eight days previously I was at my comfort level encompassed by my closest friends, my supportive family and the setting that I had learned to love and desire. Now, I sat on a dock with three young men. They were there for the same reasons, to live and experience but also they were some of the most unique people I have encountered. The three consisted of a boy by the name of Ralph Emerson, one who went by Walden Thoreau as well as a matured adolescent called Walt Whitman. We connected immediately because of our mere language of English. None of us spoke much german yet, but in three months time that would evolve into something none of us could ever even envision.


6 comments:

  1. I really like how you use the idea of foreign exchange. Are you considering using an idea that forces culture to be compared to culture? I love the deatils and the writing style, it is very good so far and think you are on a good path with a good idea!

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  2. I love how descriptive you are about everything. You should try to keep it going that way people will really get caught up in the story and not dose off...

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  3. I like this idea. You should do what Emyily said, if you start loosing that writing style it my get a little hard to read

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  4. Jo,

    Given the (entirely justified) enthusiasm of the comments above, it's pretty clear that you should keep this going (sounds like you already have this weekend's work largely behind you). I love the idea of these 'young transcendentalists', and can't wait to see where it takes you. Have fun with this! I'm anxious for a chance to read your first draft!

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  6. I like how original this is, and I love your writing style. I love how descriptive you are about everything but you still keep it simple enough. It sounds like it's going to be really good!

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